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Post by -AtAraXiA- on Aug 16, 2007 22:41:25 GMT -5
Name: Smokestrike Clan: Mistclan Rank: Warrior Gender: Male Age: Eighteen moons Personality: Smokestrike always puts his Clanmates before himself, no matter what the circumstance. He loathes fighting without a reason but loyalty to his Clan is good enough for him to leap into battle. He’s a bit overprotective of the queens in the Clan but that fact has come in handy a few times. He’s happiest when he’s moving around, he loves leading hunting patrols. He has a little too much curiosity for his own good, which gets him into trouble. Physique: Smokestrike is a black & gray tabby with white front paws. He has very pale ears & he has extremely short fur. He has dark brown eyes & a black tipped tail. Past: Smokestrike had one brother at birth, but his brother died of greencough the following leaf-bare. He had a bit of a hard time adjusting to life without his brother & he became more curious about the world around him, almost looking for a replacement for him. He didn’t pay too much attention to his mentor & when he did, he was always pushing the limits. So his apprenticeship took much longer than normal. He finally became a warrior at thirteen moons.
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Post by *~Sharppaw~* on Aug 18, 2007 0:03:49 GMT -5
Sorry, but I personally don't think this character is acceptable.
The only peeve of mine is too expand more, get more descriptive. At least a paragraph for personality, physique, and past please.
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Post by <~BloodShadow~> on Aug 22, 2007 18:35:00 GMT -5
Your peeve has been fixed, Cailey.
RE-ACCEPTED
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